To the Unknown Girl

07:59:00

I miss you
Or at least the idea of you
I miss the fan that strikes my embers
The girl that calls me to be greater
Chest pumped high, spirit burning
Masterpiece carved out, making you the chisel.

I miss that girl that calls me up on my future
Who waits in the secret place and converses with our common Saviour
Who fits my idea of a virtuous woman
With sprinkles of sarcasm and dry humor on her creamy being.

Our spirits intertwined, out heartbeats correlating
She finishes my sentences and we laugh over jokes unspoken
I ask God for a befitting friend and also for a wife
Two for the price of one is what you get from Christ

I sweat hard, get up seven times
Sleeplessness is justified only by her eyes,
Yearning for the day I approach her Dad and day,
"Sir, this girl would make my future seem like a day
And my eternity like a glance passing away
She is my life, she is a god personified
She is the metal to my structure
She is on earth for me.
Let her marry me"

I see you in every girl
Fragments however don't make a whole, it hurts.
So I stay in pain and miss you all over again
I feel we have met and I strain
To look; yet it is never plain.
Where are you?
I miss you girl. I horribly miss you
Or at least, the idea of you.

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21 comments

  1. Chilightonline13 November 2015 at 10:50

    **Walks by*

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    1. martisons15 November 2015 at 05:23

      *chases random passer-by and pleads for an actual comment*

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      This comment has been removed by the author.

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    3. Chilightonline19 November 2015 at 00:08

      Haha.

      I saw the note you dropped at my own door..

      So here's an actual comment: Nice piece neighbour, i think i know that girl, she acted one movie like that. Hehehe
      Annd yes.. Cheers to an awesome acquaintanceship. 😀

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    4. martisons15 December 2015 at 12:46

      *gasps*
      Find her and bring her to me...please!!!

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  2. Badejo john darrey15 November 2015 at 05:35

    Ochuko this is wonderful... keep it up brother

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  3. martisons15 November 2015 at 05:55

    Thanks man. It means a lot.

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  4. Maxwell15 November 2015 at 06:28

    Hmmm.#cool

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  5. Unknown15 November 2015 at 06:52

    You got me at "Sprinkles of sarcasm and dry humor on her creamy being", epic. But to be frank, i don't see myself with anyone else apart from the girl described here.. And am sure you would know that.

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  6. Augustine Enodiana15 November 2015 at 08:40

    Fragments don't make a whole #punchline.
    It's nicely written but too short.

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  7. Augustine Enodiana15 November 2015 at 08:41

    Fragments don't make a whole #punchline.
    It's nicely written but too short.

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    1. martisons17 November 2015 at 12:54

      Thanks for the support. If you're looking for length, may I recommend http://godlyintellectual.blogspot.com/2015/11/veiled.html.
      Please get back to me on what you think.

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  8. Unknown15 November 2015 at 09:37

    "Sir, this girl would make my future seem like a day
    And my eternity like a glance passing away"

    Awesomely done. You've got sth man. And here again, I join the host of Jesus faithfuls, young christian bachelors desirous of apple_avoiding Eves all around the world to pray. " Lord, open Ochukos ( and ours too *wink* ) eyes to this girl oo biko enough with the teasing ideas!! "

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    1. martisons17 November 2015 at 06:59

      She's just around the corner. Patience is key. This kind babe, na only God dey bring am.

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    2. martisons17 November 2015 at 07:04

      She's just around the corner. Patience is key. This kind babe, na only God dey bring am.

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  9. Unknown15 November 2015 at 12:09

    You too much brother...Welldone!!. I do hope to meet this girl as well. I must commend your command of English language.

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  10. Eghosa16 November 2015 at 12:45

    My guy wan marry o!! lolzz....Awesome piece bro

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  11. Unknown16 November 2015 at 13:45

    Wife is sweet sha, if you are aware of her worth in you live. Ochuko dat was a good one. I like the suspense and symphony. More grease to your Boris bro!!!!!!!

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  12. Unknown16 November 2015 at 14:11

    Ochuko it's a nice piece, keep it up

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  13. martisons17 November 2015 at 06:57

    @Harrison, Ajari Thanks for the support. Really means a lot.
    @Eghosa I'm broke as at now. Nobody is getting married.

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